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2014-12-18 2:53 am
1. Once upon a time, the Cow, the Pig and the Hen was good

2. friends.Every morning, they went out to looked for food.

3. They shared what they found.Sometimes they can have very

4. good meals if they catch some other animals. However,

5. sometimes they could find anything and they starved.

6. Luckly, there were a lot of animals near their houaes.

7. One evening ,they had very little to sharing. The Cow was

8. angry and blames the pig, “you are so lazy. The Hen is very

9. small but she find more food every day." The Pig replied,

10. "She can fly. When there was danger, she can go away easily."

11. When they was quarreling, the Hen said, "We all have

12. strengths and weaknesses. Don't argued anymore."

13. The Pig agreed to work harder and the Cow said sorry to he.

14. The Hen smiled joyfully when the two friend shook their

15. hands. They were promised not to quarrel in the future and

16. they finished the meal happy. They worked together closely

17. to find food together and they really keep their promise and

18. not quarrel anymore!

回答 (1)

2014-12-18 4:45 am
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1. Once upon a time, the Cow, the Pig and the Hen were good

2. friends.Every morning, they went out to look for food.

3. They shared what they found.Sometimes they have very

4. good meals if they catch some animals. However,

5. sometimes they could find nothing and they starved.

6. Luckly, there were a lot of animals near their houses.

7. One evening ,they had very little to share. The Cow was

8. angry and blamed the pig, “You are so lazy. The Hen is very

9. small but she finds much food every day." The Pig replied,

10. "She can fly. When there was danger, she can go away easily."

11. When they were quarreling, the Hen said, "We all have

12. strengths and weaknesses. Don't argue anymore."

13. The Pig agreed to work harder and the Cow said sorry to him.

14. The Hen smiled joyfully when the two friend shook their

15. hands. They were promised not to quarrel in the future and

16. they finished the meal happy. They worked together closely

17. to find food together and they really keep their promise and

18. not quarrel anymore!

其實第9題有兩個錯,但如果每題只可改一個錯就改find。加油,唔識要爭取學習,最重要唔好每次不做功課,令自己沒有學習機會,畢竟成績重要。上了高中可沒有太多時間學習這些,本來工作量已太多。
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