please help to check

Help to check Open Day:-
Oh what a wonderful open day
Playing all the day
Even people are jolly gay
Nothing can block me play.

Drawing with a crayon way
Awesome pictures drawn my way
Have fun all students play
Bright colour animate.

Its hard to win w/o pay
Sparkling drink in machine pay
Snatched a candy and get away
Scratch your head if you may

If parents see my work that day
Visit today sunny day
Understand booth-stall what to play
Nothing can stop me both to play !

2014-12-14 09:56:18 補充：
Proposed amendment 3rd stanza-verse
-----------------pay
-----------------pay
Our team won a race
In an acceptable way, say.

OPEN DAY

Oh what a wonderful open day
Playing all the day
Even there ARE lots of people
Nothing can IMPEDE me to play

Drawing with a crayon
AWESOME pictures HAVE drawn
Yelling like a fool because of you

Its really hard to win
Scratching my head to get candy

FeelING good and playing fun
Understand what to play
Nothing can stop me to play

You can say "all day", "the whole day", but not "all the day". ~ English usage

OK no，proplem