英文翻譯句子, 一句10分

英文翻譯句子
"享受優質生活由粉飾你家居的牆壁開始 "

My English translation:
"Top-class life enjoyment begins with beautifying the walls at home."

2014-12-06 05:06:40 補充：
Begin with beautifying the walls of your home to enjoy a high quality of life.

Enjoy a high quality of life begins with beautifying the walls of your home.
Enjoy a high quality of life begins with embellishing the walls of your home.

這樣好不好?

gerund phrase:
1. enjoying life of high quality (subject)
2. beautifying the walls of your home (object)

verb phrase: begin with

Enjoying life of high quality begins with beautifying the walls of your home.

2014-12-05 00:51:12 補充：
The verbal character of "enjoying life of high quality" is better than the abstract noun of "enjoyment of ...." in describing the situation.

Enjoy quality of life starting from the walls of your home whitewash

Enjoy the good quality of life beginning by whitewashing the walls of your home.

2014-12-05 04:05:29 補充：
Enjoying(=verbal participial) our time at home, we get pleasure from something called painting.

中文
享受優質生活由粉飾你家居的牆壁開始
翻譯為英文
Enjoy quality of life starting from the walls of your home whitewash

享受優質生活由粉飾你家居的牆壁開始:Enjoy the quality of life you begin to whitewash the walls of the home provided by cardholders proof of address