Is grammatically correct? (5 points)?
2014-11-30 8:41 pm
Finished the last project of the semester that my classmates and I worked on. We made people out of recycled items from the recycling center on campus. I had a great time in sculpture again, I made some great pieces. I'm now looking forward to taking ceramics again next semester.
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2014-11-30 9:13 pm
The first sentence doesn't have a subject. (We finished? I finished? They finished?)
Did you really make people out of recycled items? Perhaps you made stick figures or something like that. But I doubt that you made people.
The third sentence is a run-on. Put a period or a semi-colon after "again."
Did you really make people out of recycled items? Perhaps you made stick figures or something like that. But I doubt that you made people.
The third sentence is a run-on. Put a period or a semi-colon after "again."
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