Check grammar n writing style

https:// docs.google .com/document/d/15pXiSIBEXVTeHm-GCuKrlsdNMJzUtngXIAdoqys0VYA/edit

上面有兩個space, 請幫我del左佢
我想你幫我改grammar and writing style, thanks
我應該可以直接edit, 如果唔可以請email去 jensonsiu23 @yahoo.com.hk

THANKS!!