My family day作文 用英文作教我20點數

Title: My family day

You can talk about a weekend, and u go to somewhere with your family. (have some gathering, go shopping, go to countryside...) Write what you do together

* You better use past tense to write the article

You can also express your feelings and something that you learn&hope

here is an example for you:

'My Family Day'

Last Sunday, I went to Disneyland with my elder brother, dad and mum to enjoy a wonderful weekend.

We set off at ten in the morning and took the MTR to Disneyland. When we arrived there, we all cheered happily. We took some photos of the amazing castle.
Next, we went on some exciting rides, such as roller coaster and 'Space Exploring' . It was so exciting and I shouted very loudly. Almost everyone looked at me curiously and I was very embarrassed. I thought that I should be braver next time.
Then, we went to have a lunch. We ordered Japanese food, Chinese food, Western food and Italian food. Although it is quite expensive, we enjoyed the meal very much because it was too yummy!
After that, we went to the shops on the streets to buy some souvenirs, such as clothes with lovely cartoon characters, some candies, purses and decorations. We also took a lot of photos of the view and cartoon characters, such as Mickey Mouse, Winnie the Pooh and Donald Duck. They're so cute!
After we had our dinner, we visited the ghost house. We were all very afraid and when we saw the horrible ghost, we yelled and scratched each other. Luckily, finally we got out and we're safe! After we watched the firework, we left.
I was very cheerful and enjoyable that day because I had a really great time with my family. Everything in Disneyland were amazing and attracting. I hope I can go to Disneyland with my family again soon.

Hope I can help you! ^^

Chau,I Think You Are Very Good!!! **