求英文高手修改~

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[匿名]

2014-10-19 12:24 am

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我自己做的opening a meeting↓
OK,is everybody here? Welcome to the meeting.Let's start now. The purpose of our meeting today is to discuss improve the service quality and reduce workload.Let's look at agenda item 3. Do you have any ideas on how to promote the scheme?

求高手幫我睇睇有冇錯指教我plz~ 感激!

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Sze Nga

2014-10-23 5:12 am

OK,is everybody here? Welcome to the meeting.Let's start now. The purpose of our meeting today is to discuss improve the service quality and reduce workload.Let's look at agenda item 3. (Do you have any ideas on how to improve the service quality and reduce workload?)
That mean:好的,是每個人都在這裡嗎？歡迎參加會議。讓我們現在就開始。我們今天會議的目的是討論提高服務品質和減少工作量。讓我們看看議程專案 3。（你有任何關於如何提高服務品質和減少工作量的想法嗎？）

Maybe you can try:Hello,Welcome to the meeting.Let's look at agenda item 3. The purpose of our meeting today is to discuss improve the service quality and reduce workload.Do you have any ideas on how to improve the service quality and reduce workload?

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[匿名]

2014-10-19 8:49 am

Welcome to the meeting everyone. Shall we begin? The purpose of having this meeting is to discuss how to improve the service quality and reduce workload.

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