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Hong Kong is a place where the principle of One-Country-Two-Systems is practiced. Recently, Hong Kong is encountering a challenge, which has alerted the citizens that we should voice out what we desire - "We want a universal suffrage". However, the Hong Kong government adopted forceful means on the peaceful protesters stimulating the sentiment of the public and leading to the Umbrella Revolution.

why using a universal suffrage rather than an??

processing 改成 implementing 比較好

face --> faced

alert --> alerted 或 alerts

an universal sufferage --> a universal suffrage

sufferage --> suffrage

尾一句有錯字，也有錯文法。