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2014-09-23 5:38 am
There was a robbery robbed a woman's bag at Yuen Long yesterday. The woman shouted and chased after the robber for a street, he used those barriers and attacked the woman which led she had her arm broken. The women is staying in hospital with caring now.
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2014-09-24 3:11 am
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(1)that a woman being robbed----passive voice(2)which led to her broken arm---object+v-ing=her +participial adj=broken) 
2014-09-25 8:28 am
A robbery happened at Yuen Long yesterday. After being robbed of the handbag, the victim, a woman in her thirties, shouted and chased after the robber for a block. The robber turned round and attacked the woman with the barriers. He broke her arm in the process and fled. The woman was hospitalized with satisfactory condition.
2014-09-25 00:30:35 補充：
Correction: (preposition ~ in)
A robbery happened in Yuen Long yesterday.
2014-09-25 00:30:35 補充：
Correction: (preposition ~ in)
A robbery happened in Yuen Long yesterday.
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