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The second problem of our harbor is pollution.
Comparing with other harbour cities, the quality of the water in Hona Kong’s harbor is appalling.
If this problem is not solved as soon as possible, then marine life and people’s health will also be threatened.
Through this report, we can let people have better understanding of the problems of our harbor.

"If the problem does not solve ..."

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"If the problem cannot be solved ..."

2014-09-17 19:25:12 補充：
"... will also be threaten"

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"... will also be threatened"

2014-09-17 19:25:40 補充：
"we can let people to have better understanding"

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"we can let people have a better understanding"


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