grammer 有無錯, thx

雖然你只係問grammer...但唔單係grammer技術有問題...有些句子寫法和用語都要考慮...

1) invoice是賣方給買方的"付款單"
因此假如你話your invoice即是他是向你收錢[你先要確定張單是誰出給誰]
According to you invoice意思是根據你的收款單據

但是假如"你"是客戶而單據是本公司發出的...寫法可能是
According to the invoice for your "payment"/"premium",

2)保費(客戶付的費用)的正式名稱是insurance premium.
另外accrual是用於accounting講公司脹目"埋數"術語的"應付未付脹項"，一般不用指客戶的"應付而未付的"款項(因為不是公司accounting)。對客戶來講不是accrual而是要payable的。所以不用這樣名稱...
According to your insurance plan, the premium is $100.

3)1月1號至2月15號的保險費, 入數係$300
假如按你的寫法先後次序=要先講$300，也應該是past tense.
$300 was booked in for the insurance premium of 1 Jan 2011 to 15 Feb 2011

4) Production/Making of Business(Name) Card was paid in cash and the amount was not booked in last year

grammer 串錯左係 grammar ,,,, 大家都串錯了~~~~~XD

2) The accrual insurance premium is $100

4) Preparing name card was paid by cash and it WAS not booked in last year.

The other two are OK as they are.

book 作 verb 時, 解 "入帳", 是 accounting 專用術語,
"recorded in the books" 比較多數的人會明白

4) The expense on business cards, which was paid in cash, was not recorded in the books last year.

books (noun) = 賬目

你的意思是 "中翻英" 是否正確？

1) 根據你的單據,
According to your invoice,
[正確]


2) 根據你的應付賬目中, 保險費是$100
The insurance of accrual per your records is $100.

[改正]
The insurance premium is $100 "as per" (with reference to) your accounts payable records.


3) 1月1號至2月15號的保險費, 入數係$300
$300 is booked in insurance for 1st, Jan, 2011 to 15th Feb, 2011.

[改正]
The insurance premium for the period from 1st Jan. 2011 to 15th Feb. 2011 is accounted for as $300.

4) 整左名片係公司比現金, 但無入係上年賬目
Preparing name card was paid by cash and it is not booked in last year.

[改正]
The expense for preparing name cards was paid by cash and was not accounted for in last year's books.