請問如何轉poem?

2014-09-01 5:42 am
Mum always says
“You are an angel
Given to me by God.”

”Why ?” I once asked Mum.
Mum smiled gently
And stroke my hair,

“Little boys and girls are angels
Who can turn a leaf or a nutshell
Into a toy,

Who can grow up
Into brave and kind men and women,

Whose laughter is like
The song of a light cool wind.”

How to turn to write a poem about a teacher who feels grateful to her students.
Need to express how the teacher shows his/her love and care to his/herstudents.
Need to follow the pattern.
Need to rhyme.

回答 (2)

2014-09-01 10:55 am
✔ 最佳答案
Teacher always says
“I am the sunshine
of your life.”

”Why ?” a student once asked the teacher.
Teacher smiled gently
And pointed to a tree outside,

“Teachers are sunshine
That can turn a seed or a tuber
Into a seedling,

That can nurture it
Into a tree bearing brilliant apples,

Whose warmth is like
The picture of a glittering camp fire.”

2014-09-01 09:25:54 補充:
Teacher always says
“You are the sunshine
of my life.”

[unchanged]

“Students are sunshine
That can turn a seed or a tuber
Into a seedling,

[unchanged]

Whose warmth is like
The apple of my eye."
2014-09-02 12:14 am
Teacher always says,
"I can change ideas
Who should behave&think clear"

"Why?" I once asked teacher
"When you're young dear
Treat old with respect dear!"

"Students are ideas
Who treat people right with cheer
Respect classical year"

"Something about life
To appreciate everythings in life,

From peer group to play group dear
Approved&judged by your peer."


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