星期一在8樓見的英文點講

Please go to the first floor of the hotel at one o'clock on Monday to meet me.

你唔喜歡，如果約朋友可以分兩句咁寫:
Are you free next Monday, 1pm?
We could meet on the 1st floor of the hotel.

梗係On 9 到極啦，咁多on。
簡單英語交談 (conservation)，一個on都唔駛 ;

See you next Monday, 1 o'clock at Hotel 1st floor.

1. 因為係英語交談，可以簡短表述，及免去文法 (preposition -on)
2. 你冇講明(specify)哪一個星期一，所以係指下星期一。
3. 滿意未？

我約你星期一1點在酒店1樓見
I would like to meet you on first floor of the hotel at one o'clock in coming Monday.

怪怪地. 係先約咗人時間, 地點和活動. okay咗, 至直提出見面位置來confirm.
其實你係未約人, 係第一次出, 定係已經約咗活動, 已確認見面地點?
本身中文表逹已經有點累贅...
我近來發現, 好多人本身中文既表現, 都係有點問題, 然後再直接轉英文, 勉強造一句英文, 但變成唔係正常係英語.

How about meeting you next Monday at the hotel on the first / eighth floor?

Let's meet on Monday at one o'clock on the first floor of the hotel.See you.

An appointment with you on Monday at 1 o'clock on the first floor above at (---) Hotel.