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Hello, I am ________. I have worked in BONJOUR to be a sales for two years . Before it I was a Hair stylist . I been a hair stylist for four years. I am senior of sale. I understand that I need to know what is the guest wants.I can speak in putonghua
and some English.My hobby is photography and watch movie. I hope I can learn more knowledge which is about watch.Also , I thought the career veneer there will
be more.I hope I can joined your company.

你好 我以前做左4年HAIR stylist 之後係卓越做SALES2年
對銷售都相當有經驗 明白要先了解客人需要 我能夠講國語 同簡單英語
平時既興趣係攝影 同睇電影
希望可以係貴公司學習同了解多D關於錶既知識
認為貴公司發展既機會
同空間比較大 承意希望能夠加入貴公司
I'm very glad that I can be chosen for the interview by your company My name is so and so and had been working as the hairstylist for over four years; and then I had worked as salesman for two years. Therefore, I have had the experience as a sale's agent and understanding the needs of the consumers. In addition, I can speak fluent Mandarin but little English and I'm interested in taking photos and watching TV at my leisure. More than that, I want to apply and join into your company because I need to broaden my knowledge of the watch and so as to serve your company. In regard to my characters, I'm diligent, energetic, honest, obedient, considerate, and accountable. Finally, I do hope that my experience and qualification will meet the requirement of that job and your consideration and approval will be heartily appreciated. Thank you.

多謝兩位~~~~~THX^^

Hello I used to do four years HAIR stylist left outstanding after the department was doing SALES2

Experienced sales are quite understand the need to first understand that I can speak Mandarin guests with simple English

Usually only interested in photography with the Department of the Air movie

I hope the same can be tied to know more about your company to learn about the table both knowledge D

The Company believes the opportunity to develop both

Order of Italy with a larger space hoping to join your company

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