拜託幫我改英文作文

在成長過程中, 我們的心智逐漸成熟,必須學著為自己的行為負責任

Growing up mean (that) learning to take more responsibility for our decisions . When I studied in senior high school , my mother got ill . Because of the illness , she can’t go on working at 36 restaurant . I made up my mind to reduce familial pressure , so I do a part-time work at 36 restaurant .

When I went to workplace first time , I was nervous that I couldn’t do my best . After that , I still made the mistake , so the boss regarded me as stupid guy . This was the first time that I wanted to escape from the problem . However , I thought of my ill mom , I decided to overcome the problem by myself .

Eventually , I stood up again and again , and did it well by myseld . The experiment made me realize that if you want to solve your problem , you would try to face it .


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(禮物篇)

I have a guitar which is my birthday present from my father . It’s able to play various rock and roll such as – The Beatles , Oasis and Nirvana . At that time , I received the guitar, I was extremely amazed and delighted and I give my father a big hug with thankful .

My father is a player of guitar at the rock band . From my childhood , I usually lishtened to the sound of guitar around our home . When the band held a live show , our familys always took part in toghther . Whenever my father played in music at the stage , I screamed loudly . He is the most handsome man in my heart .I hoped that I could become guitar player like him , so I try to save money for buying guitar . However , the guitar is more expensive than I could afford .

One day , I went home from shcool , and I see that a guitar laid in my room . Then , my father sang the birthday song for me , and tell me that present is a guitar . I burst out crying because I’m very delighted .

One day , I wish that my dream would come true that be a player like my father .