麻煩幫忙更改應邀面試的英文信

Dear Sir / Madam,

Thank you for your mail and consideration. I look forward to attending the interview this Thursday.

Yours faithfully,
xxx

Comment:
以簡短為作 acknowledgement 已收到信. 不適宜多說
句子避免重複, Thank you for your mail 已經說明你收到信, 第一句可刪除
發這信這個人未一定面試你那個人, 所以改了
I look forward to attending the interview this Thursday

I look forward to hearing from you. 這句子是 redundant (多餘的), 如同再等候答覆

2014-07-09 03:59:05 補充：
TOMING88:

不明白你為何寫這句
I look forward to hearing from you.
假定你是 2014-07-08 寄出這 Email, 但 2014-07-10 (Thursday) 便面試
你期待兩天內, 別人再回覆你, 回覆什麼?
是否要人 confirm 收到你信? 知道你會去面試.

I have received your mail.
Thanks for your kind consideration.
I will be there on time this Thursday as a candidate when your decision will be made.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
xxx

文法上：

I will be there on time this Thursday.

1. delete "on" before "this"
2. "Thursday" needs a capital "T"