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To Whom It May Concern:

My mother was laid off recently. She cannot afford to pay my school fee. As a result, I won’t be able to continue my study at your school.

I would like to know whether the enrolment deposit of $3,200 can be refunded as this amount greatly relieves our financial stress in such a hard time.

This letter notifies you of XXXX (your full name) withdrawal from the school and I won’t enrol next term. Thank you.

Yours faithfully,


Your full name
Student number

Comment:
留位費 =confirmation fee, registration fee, enrolment deposit
香港政府使用 enrolment deposit

refund (transitive verb) - to give someone their money again, especially because they have paid too much for something or have decided they do not want it

They refunded my money.
subject + transitive verb + object
subject 是給錢人 (They 是指 school)

lay off (transitive verb) 暫時解雇 - to end someone’s employment, especially temporarily, because there is not enough work
不用加 from her job
They lay off workers.
The workers are laid off.

不知道退學是中學 (school) 或大學 (university), 大專 (college), 中學用 school fee, 大學用 tuition fee
大學你自己通知, 中學是要父母通知學校

如果你母親寫, 要改少少, I was laid off, I cannot afford to pay my son’s school fee. .he won’t be able to continue....
This letter notifies you of XXXX (your full name) withdrawal from the school and he won’t enroll next term.

Your mother’s full name
Mother of XXXX
Student number

正式通知通知學校你退學, 學校會自動地取消你的學位

Hope this can help.

My mother has recently been layoffs, no work, not for my tuition, not studying in
your schoolCan you return 3200 yuan reservation fee to me, to resolve the pressure of life, please cancel my degree, thank you!

我媽媽最近被裁員，沒有工作，不能為我交學費，不能在貴校就讀！
可否退回3200元留位費給我，以解決生活壓力，請代為取消我的學位，謝謝！
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My mother was recently laid off, did not work, can not pay tuition for me, not enrolled in your school!
Can return 3200 yuan reservation fee for me to address the pressure of life, please cancel my degree behalf, thank you!

2014-07-07 15:25:50 補充：
To XXXX Principal

My mother was recently laid off, did not work, can not pay tuition for me, not enrolled in your school!
Can return 3200 yuan reservation fee for me to address the pressure of life, please cancel my degree behalf, thank you!Yours faithfully,


XXXX XXXX XXXX
2014/X/XX
校長

2014-07-07 15:26:08 補充：
校長=Principal

2014-07-07 15:27:18 補充：
My mother was recently laid off, can not work, can not pay tuition for me, not enrolled in your school!
Can return 3200 yuan reservation fee for me to address the pressure of life, please cancel my degree behalf, thank you!Yours faithfully.

My mother was recently laid off, did not work, can not pay tuition for me, not enrolled in your school!
Can return 3200 yuan reservation fee for me to address the pressure of life, please cancel my degree behalf, thank you!

My mother was recently laid off, did not work, can not pay tuition for me, not enrolled in your school!
Can return 3200 yuan reservation fee for me to address the pressure of life, please cancel my degree behalf, thank you!

My mother was recently laid off, did not work, can not pay tuition for me, not enrolled in your school!
Can return 3200 yuan reservation fee for me to address the pressure of life, please cancel my degree behalf, thank you!

My mother was recently laid off, did not work, can not pay tuition for me, not enrolled in your school!
Can return 3200 yuan reservation fee for me to address the pressure of life, please cancel my degree behalf, thank you!