基礎英文之簡單自我介紹

基礎英文班至一個段落,需用英文簡單自我介紹
麻煩各位知識淵博的大大能幫忙檢查改正一下,讓我能表達的更順暢流利

晚上好 各位同學
Good evening, every body.

我的名子是TOM XXX
My name is TOM XXX.

我和我的家人一起住在新北市永和區 XX住宅大樓(有電梯.有管理員的小社區)
I live in a XX block(edifice) in Yungho New Taipei City with my family.

家中成員包括 媽媽 爸爸 哥哥 和我
My family include my mom my dad my older brother and me.

媽媽是家庭主婦,爸爸是郵差,哥哥是電腦工程師,而我曾經是業務員,現在正努力學英文
My mom is a housewife,my dad is a postman,my brother's job is a computer engineer and I used to be a salesman,now I am learning English hard.

媽媽總是告訴我,誠實的孩子不會變壞,而我說孝順的孩子不會變壞
Mom always tells me,the honest children will not be bad and i say the filial children are't goning to be bad.

我有XX公分,XX公斤,年齡則是秘密
I am XXcm Height,XXkg weight,my age is a secret.

我有黑色眼睛,短的直的黑色頭髮,和親切的笑容
I have dark eyes,short straight black hair and kind smile.

我喜歡運動,健身.跑步和打籃球.一週通常運動三次
I like to exercise,fitness.go jogging and play basketball.About three times a week.

我夢想中的工作是美國職業籃球球員,因為可以賺很多錢,有許多粉絲
My dream job is NBA professional athlete,because i can make much money,have a lot of fans.

我的偶像是麥可喬丹,說真的 他是神
My icon is Michael Mordan,actually he is the god.

我喜歡聽流行音樂和經典音樂,像是夢醒時分和在雨中
I like POP music and Classical music,like The dreams Pass Away(夢醒時分) and in the raining(在雨中)

我最愛的歌手是張學友
I favorite singer is (Jacky Hok Yau Cheung)

他的歌聲非常動人
His singing is very fascinating.

雖然英文很難 但我很喜歡英文
Though learn english is hardly,i very like learn english.

這堂課很有趣.好玩
This class is interesting and funny.

最後,謝謝老師,為自己加油也為巴西加油(世界盃)
At last,thank you teacher,fighting for me and cheer up for Brazil.

大大大大感謝~3Q!!!