T.T 20 點招人改GRAMMAR 面試用

1-2) [As for the academic] atmosphere [x respect], [it encourages the college students to keep on learning, which in turn helps nurture a positive learning attitude within them.]

3) If I [can] study at this college, I will learn actively.

4) In [the aspect of industry exposure], [the college] students [may receive training in some of the largest Chinese cities.]

5) Also, they can join the Mentorship programme.

6) To date, no other higher education institutions have held these two programs.

7) I would like to [master] the [x career's] communication skills and knowledge [needed for my career] though the training and [mentorship].

8) I am very inquisitive and [have always been yearning to enrich myself with new knowledge.]

Some Ideas:

1) Instead of academics, the college emphasis student's
extra-curricular activity

2) As the college had constructed xxxx learning environment, it helps developing suitable learning attitude

3) Once I am given the opportunity of studying at xxxxx, ......

4) xxxx provide opportunities of training/ placement at Mainland China

5) Mentorship Program is promoted and one's learning experience can be transfer to ......

6) Both the mentorship program and training at Mainaland are unique features of the college

7) Through ......, career's ........ can be further enhanced

我完全唔會用既英文......
你應該打中文俾人翻譯

In educating atmosphere respect
無人會咁講
唔明意思

this collenge's students
可以接受, 不過最好 the students in the college

learn activity
活動唔係俾人學習, 活動係俾人從中學習
they learn from the activities.

一塌糊塗
你應該打中文俾人翻譯, 在慢慢了解
執一濟藥俾你好好醫下
1. 你中文比逹得唔好...英文更加衰
你從英文學返中文啦, 我以前都係咁
subject + verb + object

2............

學住一先...有排你學

想改返個GRAMMAR...不如你打返個中文俾人翻譯

2014-06-13 13:20:10 補充：
一係搵我幫你補下習....