急用!面試!改英文文法,20點

[匿名]

2014-06-13 2:05 am

1) When I was a form 4 student,I done well on BAFS.

2)I thought that I could reduce the time to study BAFS and use more time to
increase another subject's achievement.

3)Therefore,my bafs's result being not good enough.

4)If I study BAFS again,I will balance the balance the time to study BAFS and other subjects.

5)Also,I would search some information about marketing.

6)I think it may increase my BAFS's level.

回答 (1)

七瀨遙

2014-06-13 4:01 am

✔ 最佳答案

1) When I was a Form 4 student, I [performed] well [in] BAFS.

2) I thought [x that] I could [improve my performance in other subjects by spending more time of studying BAFS on them].

3) [However, it turned out that] my [BAFS] result [was] not [as] good [as expected].

4) If I [could] study BAFS again, I [would strike a] balance [x the balance the time to study] [between] BAFS and [the] other subjects [when planning my study].

5) Also, I would [keep an eye on the latest news and trends of] marketing.

6) I [believe that these would improve my performance in] BAFS.

2014-06-12 20:03:17 補充：
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