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Professional sports stars are some of the richest and most famous people in the world. They are often in the news because they have behaved badly in their private lives. Do you think that sports stars have a duty to set an example to young people both on and off the field? Write s a letter to the Hong Kong Post giving your views on this topic. Sign your letter' Chris Wong'.








Dear Editor,

May I make use of your column to express my view on whether sports stars have a duty to set an example to young people both on and off the field? Nowadays, many young people worship sports stars. Some of these are imitate sports stars’ behavior to gain satisfaction. However, they are still young and lack of social experience, they are still unable to distinguish right from wrong. Therefore, I think sports stars should have a duty to set an example to young people both on and off the field.

Friends are very important to young people. Make friends can enhance their interaction relationship to prepare adult life. Under peer pressure, young people follow their friends worship sports stars. If not, they will lose friends. Some young people imitate sports stars’ behavior to attract others, gain confidence and satisfaction.

However, young people are still young. They are still unable to distinguish right from wrong. They think the behavior is right because the sports stars do it. For example, if the sports star drug abuse, young people follow. But drug abuse is a bad habit. It goes against Hong Kong law. If exploded by police, the young people will have a criminal record, which affects their future. Furthermore, they are hard to quit drugs. In the long term, it destroys our health and concentration.