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My mother educates(教育) me very free. For example she doesn't care so much how many scores that I can get. She never blames (責罵)me.
註解1: educates 是動詞，而 is = verb to be 等於重複了2: "like how many score did I get"☞ 中式英語3: scoid （x) ☞ blame
Once a time , I didn't want to go to the school and treated her
impolitely.(不禮貌) She didn't say anything but also drove me to the
school .
註解: treated是動詞, "形容動詞要用副詞" impolitely
At that time,I had got a worse result( 成績) on the main examinations, but Mummy didn't complain me anything, she would rather(反而)want me just to be happy.
註解：grade 等級、級別 result 成績
On that time (x) ☞ At that time
This memory let me wonder whether I am a good kid or not ,she still
loves me never change ,and I want to let her know she is the best
Mother in my mind.
註解1: know= 知道了，wonder whether= 置疑是否2：did't (x) ☞ didn't
2. In my mind ☞比較 in my heart 通順些
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My mother 1.educates(教育) me is very free like how many score did I get ,she never scoid(責罵)me.
Once a time , I did't wnt to go to school and treated her unpolite (不禮貌)she did't say anything but also drave me on the school .
On that time,I had a bad grade(成績) on the big exam but mom didn't
tell me anything rather(反而)want me just be happy.
This memory let me know whether I am a good kid or not ,she still
love me never change ,and I want to let her know she is the best mom in my heart.

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怕改得太多 老師覺得怪
初學語文有錯很正常
句首都是大寫, 除 我 和名字 等專有名詞其他並沒有必要維持大寫

My mother educates me freely(adv), like no matter how much of the score i got, she would never scold me for that.

Once I didn't want to go to school and being impolite to her, she didn't say anything and drove me to the school.

When I got a bad grade of a big exam, she said nothing and simply wanted me to be happy.

These(複數 你上面舉了兩個例子) memories make me realise(理解/領悟 know 是指知道) whether I am a good kid or not, she will still love me,(never change 多餘的) and I want to let her know she is the best mom in my heart.

語句結束或語氣轉折就用逗號

你寫中式英文我覺得很正常, 不過那是老師的問題 我就不多說了