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2014-05-06 8:20 pm
他已經第三次在寫作方面取得A GRAD 的分數

He had got A grade in third times in a row in writing aspect.

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2014-05-07 2:22 am
✔ 最佳答案
He had got an A in writing three times in a row.

其實你第二句無咩問題,只不過有啲字你寫得比較累贅,例如 A grade, writing aspect,可以寫成 A, writing。

另外,也可以參考下其他同義詞哦,例如:
He had got an A -> He had scored an A
in a row -> consecutively


2014-05-06 18:28:12 補充:
如果唔係連續三次嘅話,你可以試試寫成:
It was his third A in writing (這是他寫作的第三個A)
This was his third time of getting an A in writing (這是他第三次在作文拎A)
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2014-05-07 9:58 am
連續 3 次取得 grade A 可以說 ~

He got a grade A in writing three times in a row.
He got a grade A in writing for the third consecutive time.

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Boys A Grade = 男子A組/甲組 (香港校際田徑比賽分A組)

Out of five 回答者, 只有七瀨遙是對.
2014-05-07 3:09 am
It was the third time he got A in writing.
參考: own knowledge
2014-05-07 2:31 am
The first sentance has grammatical mistakes and you can change it into: He got an A grade three times in a row in writing aspect.
2014-05-07 1:16 am
IT IS The third time he has made ​​A GRAD in writing scores
2014-05-06 8:44 pm
He had got A grade 3 times in writing aspect.
It is cardinal number,a number such as 1,2,and 3 used to show quantity rather than order.
The ordinal number is a number that refers to the position of something in a series,for example "first", "second", "THIRD",etc.
Now it means consecutively adv.,following one after another in a series,eg:-
He had got A grade 3 times consecutively in writing aspect.
"aspect" means a particular part or feature of a situation, an idea,, a problem,etc; a way in which it may be considered.


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