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I said that there was nothing like history which would let one discoved what had happened in the sands of time. As I remembered in my childhood, my father always taught me about the story of country affairs whereas his experience under the communist regime besides he would let me hear the songs being sung by Allen Tam, Leslie Cheung and Teresa Teng. As the result, that had changed my love about enjoying music and also induced my interests towards the past history and society of Hong Kong, China and even worldwide.
It had been my habit since my childhood to read lots of history books which covered the ancient Dynasties of Ha, Shen, Chau to the recently established People's Republic of China even their official histories and legends. Besides, I liked to read Chinese Literatures,The Four Books,{The outsider's historic information of all famous literates},{The real facts about traditional senior officers} and {The Biography of General Ngor Fei}. That'll develop my interests in literature and history as well. And I got rather high marks in both Chinese and Western histories while studied in Secondary hight school though even at times got lower marks without given up my interests. It was until entering into Senior high school, I chose to study Chinese history and acted voluntarily as assistant of that course and that had changed my future.
Regarding the detailed study of Chinese history, I was deeply involved in it through the explanation and interesting talks of my my teacher. In addition, my outstanding abilities in both Chinese history and literature had been praised by my teacher. Through studying of ancient literates, I learned their characters,noble thoughts and ways of managing matters and that would be the good examples for us to remember and to prevent from committing the same mistakes and even totally collapsed
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我喜歡歷史,喜歡探知古代發生過的事。I like History and especially like to know thehappening of the ancient event.從小開始,父親就常跟我說古代的一些民間小故事,When I was small, my father always told me interestingfolktale.向我訴說他小時侯在五星紅旗統治下的生活,Telling me what he had experienced under thegovernance of the “ Five-star Red Flag” – the People’s Republic of China.時常播放譚詠麟、張國榮、鄧麗君的歌給我聽。Sharing his favourite songs of Allan Tam, Lesliecheung and Trersa Tang with me.這不但改變了我聽歌的歌路,還使我對昔日香港、中國乃至世界的歷史及社會實況產生興趣。The sharing varied my trend on music loving.Also, it alter my sentiment towards the society of the past of Hong Kong and ChinaMainland even the past incident that happen in the History of the world.由小學開始,我就喜愛閲讀歷史書,From school of primary, I interested in reading Historybooks.
未能全部翻譯, 遲些再翻譯。

This is an idiomatic translation containing expressions that are natural to your original piece of work:-The translation from C/E are in an idiomatic English:-
(1)When my father told me about Red China's lives and yet spinned the Teresa Teng's songs, I have shown an interest in History. I have read the Four Classics; the Scholars;The official book of the gov.;General Yue Fei and the ancient history of Xia,Sheng& Zou to the recorded P.R.of China.
---Further studies on literature and history have made me learnt the ancient&social moral sentiment&approach, and how to avoid worst disasters with a sense of history, which are so fascinating.

(2)In f4 I joined HK Polytech U for "Career development leadership training programme"to take an interest in my future on "Promote ourselves in the best interests of ourselves."


(3)The Eng.drama training activities in f3 has helped me to learn how to take things critically in the situation.

(4)Historical,cultural&operational research of HK&China will be undertook and carried out extensively by me.

Keep up with the good work.

2014-04-27 19:12:34 補充：
Whole piece translation formally toned is based on correct or accepted rules of grammar of social so behaviour on official translation like a History lesson.
(1)History is the study of events in the past,such as those of a P.R of C. covering the government of Red China,social so&folktales etc.