有關英文tenses 問題請教大家

2014-04-25 6:39 am
George went to Orange School to have an English lesson on 20th April 2014. He drove his car to the school. He arrived at the school at 9:30am. The school was big. There were six storeys in the school. There was a cute dog near the entrance of the school. The school was surrounded by flowers which were beautiful. He went to Room 506 to have the English lesson. The room was big. The floor of the room was even. There were twenty students in the room. He started to have the English lesson at 9:41am. He gained knowledge in English from the English lesson. While he was having the English lesson, his mother was washing dishes. The English lesson ended at 10:55am.

各位網友,小弟想問下以上篇文既句子d tenses 岩唔岩。宜家間篇係大,咁
"The room was big" 用past tense 有無問題。

回答 (4)

2014-04-26 12:10 am
✔ 最佳答案
Ray, 你好! 對於你以上的提問,我有以下的解答。

1. 如果你整篇都係story黎,用past tense 就完全無問題。

2. 文章 tenses可再美化,會變得更好↓↓↓

<#1> George drove his car to Orange School to have an English lesson on 20th April 2014. He arrived at school at 9:30am.

<#2> There was a cute dog lying near the entrance of the school
He learnt something new from the English lesson.

<#3> While he was having his English lesson, his mother was washing dishes.

<#4> He went to Room 506 to have the English lesson where the room was big.

用多d clause會更好~ ^ ^

希望幫到你啦~
願小弟之淺見對您有所斬獲與助益
2014-05-04 10:49 am
George went to Orange School to attend an English lesson on 20th April 2014. And he drove his car to the school then arrived at 9:30am. The school was big where were six storeyed and there was a cute dog near the entrance of the school. In front of that was surrounded by flowers which were beautiful. He went to Room 506 together with other twenty students. The room was big with wooden floor. He started to listen and study the English lesson at 9:41am.and gained a lot of knowledge from that. Finally, the English lesson ended at 10:55am.
參考: Myself and the Dictionary
2014-04-30 2:54 am
English lesson English lesson English lesson

You kept repeating these words!

2014-04-29 19:02:35 補充:
On the morning of xxxx, George had to attend an English class at Orange School, so he drove there and arrived at xxxx...

2014-04-29 19:06:42 補充:
特定日子 on the morning of xxxx
2014-04-25 9:02 am
用past tense 無問題


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