英文演講稿求修改(急需)

God afternoon(morning ),My principle ,my teachers and my classmates

I am so glad that I have the chance to stand on the stage , facing you guys for a speech.

Today i am going to talk about Smart- phone;

The Smart- phone is not only popular in Taiwan but also in the entire world.
Smart phone make our life more convenient in many ways:
First of all, We can talk to our friends whenever we want instead of meeting thethem. We can record every beautiful moment in our life by taking pictures and
keep those gorgeous memory with ourselves. We can listen to music whenever we have time and relax our mind in order to keep the flexibility in our life.
Also, we can search for answers online by cellphone when we have questions.


Secondly, the invent of smartphone offer human extra entertainments.
We can play games by our smart phone anywhere,
send messages,and even watch movies
But I think that the most important function of smartphone is to let us be
in touch with our families .
By the way, it's also important for people to have a cellphone always carried
along for emergency.

All in all, cellphone is really useful to human's life.
However, if we use smart phone without being respect to other people around
us, we are going to be extremely annoying to others. On of the example is to
speak too loudly on the phone and disturbs other people.
Therefore, no matter when and where we are, we should always have the phone etiquette with us, make ourself and others a good life!

Smart phone is really awesome!

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Good morning/afternoon principle......
I'm XXXX from class XX (you have to tell your audience who you are)
Today, it's a great honour for me to deliver a speech here, I'm very happy.
/ I'm so happy that i can have a chance to be here delivering a speech.

I'm now going to talk about my opinion on smartphones.

Nowadays, smartphones are very popular worldwide and also in Taiwan. When you're walking around the street or taking transport, you can always see many people using smartphones. I've got one too. I think most of people share the same reasons of ising smartphone.

Firstly, apart from the basic telephoning function, we can download some useful applications in our smartphones to have a free text communication with our friends, capture photos or listen to music with different special effects installed in the applications, and watch soap operas or movies.

Secondly, it can be a mini portable computer. We can now use the phones to surf the Internet if Internet connection is obtained. It can be provided in form of Wifi connection by the malls or some shops or in form of data transmission by phone company. So when we're not home, we can use smartphones to browse websites whenever we want. It's very convenient, isn't it?

But nothing is perfect. Despite the convenience, they're "aging" quite fast. After you've used them for a number of days, you'll find that it gradually takes more and more time to load an application and even can't be switched on. But I believe that this condition can be improved/they can be more durable with the continual advancement of technology.

That's all what I want to share with you.
Thanks for your attention!

有些地方我用中文解釋一次會比較好
為什麼我會省略"get in touch with my parents" 和 "used in an emergency"?
因為傳統電話都有這些功能吧, 個人覺得應提及更多智能電話的特點

第二是最後的if people speak too loudly
. they can be very annoying" 這點,原因也是差不多,就算不是用智能電話,也會大聲說話,所以我改了這點,就是智能電話不太耐用..但是如果你只是想從"電話"這個角度去講,原本的那點也是可以說的.