我想要篇中英文見工自我介紹, 請問要點講先叫好?

(1)As a young man I welcome this interview for a job ; Sir.
(2)Your 3 honoured Boss interviewed,eyewitnessed examinated already on me on Monday last.
(3)I sincerely hope to join your clerical staff connected with the gov.-office work.
(4)The school teaches how to keep records or accounts in an gov-office as an office clerk,also a filing clerk;
(5)I learnt to be an official in charge of the gov-records of the Council Court as shown in my Enclosed CV;Sir.
(6)I am committed to pursuing a gov career in clerical management by gov-learning.
(7)I would bring to the post a proven success with common citizens.
(8)I look forward to joining the gov from you all!
(9)Thank you for the time and attention of which you can question me more formal examination now.

各位先生女士:
早安.我叫張奮發.今年十九歲.中學畢業.今日是來應徵文員職位. 我能使用國.粵.英語溝通.平日亦有留意著一些社會事情.我個性謙和.容易同各種人相處.平日自己保持每日写作日記-在學校時亦曾参與壁報及校刋的编寫工作.自信對一般文書工作能迅速融合在貴公司團隊,投入服務.希望各位能考慮我嘅申請-我能随時上班.投入服務.我接受公司所定工作及薪酬的安排-多謝.

Happy Day!, Ladies and Gentlemen!,
My name is Cheung fun fat, Tom. It is my honor to stand infront of you today. I come to apply for the job of clerk which you post in the South China Morning Post today.

I am a graduate of a Chinese High School. I am confident that I can be trained as a clerk in your Company. I am bright and easy. I am willing to learn. I can go along with people and cooperative with coworkers and clients. I can report to duty promptly. Thanks.

文員,一般是指辦公室內一些助理的工作.入職時通常要求不高.健康.開朗.有禮貌及適當表達能力即可.参加interview時要穿著整齊清潔.不必著西裝打領帶.恤衫長褲皮鞋就得.帶身份証及學歷証件.入場前要閂咗部手機‧答問時雙眼注視問你的人.答完躹躬.無問無答.微笑.自信,有禮貌.離場時講再見-

不知道你的學歷, 工作經驗, 他人很難代筆
Interview 重要是給人好印象, 勝任 (competent) 申請那份工作
Show initiative (主動) to learn 與 get along well with other staff.
你要詳細認識公司背景. 強調自己能做什麼

七瀨遙對 TOMING88 的評論, I couldn’t agree more.
他不知寫什麼, 文法, 用字, 思維邏輯等等錯…
如果採用, an invitation to disaster!

2014-04-09 09:36:04 補充：
從七瀨遙才知 Yip 是老人家
下列改正, 抱歉得罪了.

1. I would wish to be interviewed ~ 錯
interview 已經在進行中
2. act 用錯, work 代替
3. clerical clerk ~ 過多
4. diligent 和 hard-working 意思相同
5. 改 I do wish I can be considered ~ 被人 considered, 不是自己去 consider
6. 整篇好像沒有怎樣自我介紹

小妹愚見：

如果跟 TOMING88 哥哥篇嘢，一定即刻 fail，死因：唔通順、語氣高傲、跟文員份工無關。如果跟 yip 爺爺篇嘢，有機會，但係因為 elaborate 你嘅 experience 同 what you can do for the company，會遜色咗。

其實你唔講你 CV 有啲咩，人哋點同你寫呢？一係你自己寫完擺上嚟啦。

以下是有關如何應用英文語言來介紹自己的竅門?
Sir or Madam, it is my pleasure to be able to introduce myself in front of you. Having learned that there is a vacancy of clerical clerk in your company and then I would wish to be interviewed so as to show my competence for the task. As for my qualification, I graduated from vocational school several years ago and also studied in the evening school for upgrading myself. If I were given the opportunity to act as a clerk and will do my best to fulfill your requirement. Because, I am diligent, hard working, enthusiastic, energetic,competent and reliable. Finally, I do wish to consider my case after the interview and your kind approval will be deeply appreciated. Thank you very much.