Complete sentence

Dear Mrs Robinson,

It has been brought to my attention that you are the main convenor of the fifth Symposium on Cities and Culture in Brisbane. As you may know, I am currentlycarrying out research in this field. I have included a copy of my curriculum,which contains the details of my research and published works.

I am writing to express myinterest in giving a talk in this year’s symposium, to present an overview ofcurrent thinking, along with acase study of a cultural enhancement programme recently implemented here in Glasgow. As the main goal of this symposiumis the encouragement of dialogue between different support groups and artisticmovements, I feel that myresearch would fit very well into the conference. I would be extremely grateful if you could consider myproposal. Should you wish toreceive more information about my current work, please don’t hesitate tocontact me.

Thank you very much for your attention and consideration. I am looking forward to receiving yourreply.

Yours sincerely,
Nadia Boulevard



2014-03-29 20:51:14 補充：
Special for 回答者:yip******
你遺漏了三個, 倒不如講迷

Typo errors:
“feel that” should read as “I feel that”

1. “I would be extremely gratefulthe” should read as “I would be extremely grateful”

2. “main goal” should read as “the main goal”

3. “your attentionI” should read as “your attention”

Dear Mrs Robinson,

It has been brought to my attention that you are the main convenor of the fifth Symposium on Cities and Culture in Brisbane. As you may know, I am currently carrying out research in this field. I have included a copy of my curriculum, which contains the details of my research and published works.

I am writing to express my interest in giving a talk in this year’s symposium, to present an overview of current thinking, along with a case study of a cultural enhancement programme recently implemented here in Glasgow. As the main goal of this symposium is the encouragement of dialogue between different support groups and artistic movements, feel that my research would fit very well into the conference. I would be extremely grateful if you could consider my proposal. Should you wish to receive more information about my current work, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

Thank you very much for your attention and consideration. I am looking forward to receiving your reply.

Yours sincerely,
Nadia Boulevard

I would be extremely grateful,the main goal, I am writing , between different support groups , as you may know , your attention, feel that , to my attention , should you wish , along with

2014-03-29 09:13:38 補充：
Amendment: feel that should read I feel that.