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With the aim (to) of selecting the new conference venue, (a) primary and secondary research were carried out. First, (whereas) the conference requirements were acquired directly from the CCC organisation. Rental information (next) was then requested from the offices of the corresponding companies. This information was (being) collated for comparison. In (the) addition, the official Web site of the local transport authority was consulted and different transport options (they) were evaluated. Finally, a site visit and inspection of both the (two) proposed venues were carried out. Evaluation was then made (from) according to the criteria stated (on) in the introduction of this report.