Reference Letter 文法

2014-03-13 9:59 pm
公司員工要求老闆一REFERENCE LETTE, 由於老闆要求我列出此人工作態度不佳, 而我沒有這方面經驗(以往屬1人員工)
請幫忙查看以下文法是否可以. 感謝

DATE



TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN


This is to certify that MissXXX HKID:XXXXXX was employed by XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Limited as a clerk from 2013 to 2014. At the time of their departure her salary was HK$00000.00

I worked with Miss So in that capacity of Director and we interacted on a daily basis. Unfortunately, She did not meet our job expectations. During her employment, She was unable to focus and she was unable to correct this problem despite repeated discussions and warnings.

She resigned on her own accord.


Sincerely

NAME
{POSITION}

回答 (2)

2014-03-13 11:07 pm
✔ 最佳答案
請看你信尾簽名NAME[Position = DIRECTOR]所以在內容中不用寫in the capacity of Director另外是否每天「互動」並不是重點,你是Director要跟她(Miss So)日日監督一個clerk仔/女從管理學上講有可能是你有問題多過她(講笑)。 點樣寫一封負面的reference真是高難度的,可諒,由於你提及的內容不多,只能簡單重寫給你參考。 During the short period working with her, I noticed her level of concentration was not up to our requirement in handling multiple tasks. Her duty included office administrative, coordination staff functions, (你自己列出), etc. and she was not able to comprehend procedures very accurately nor self-correct when errors happened. I found her easily distracted by office events and popular subjects; as a result, I believe she is more suitable for less structured jobs and duties in a more dynamic and free-spirit company. 以上表示自己(你老闆)對人觀察入微,並且表示對她的了解和評價,但顯出寬宏大量(不要提給了幾多次warning-那只是對自己公司職員示威,別人不會覺得是好事),同時亦要給對方公司一點正面提示配對請她的職位是否適合她的性格/特質。最後請住寫了的reference要有心理準備會被當事人看到(無論是她要求還是送了去別公司那主管給她看證明她前僱主咁講喎),所以假設你老闆現實上不懂她最後一句也建設性地指示她應該考慮的工作性質,希望就算她看到也不會覺得你老闆在背後插她。
參考: 自已幾十年工作經驗希望幫到你...讓你老闆也開心眼見大同。
2014-03-14 5:03 pm
TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN

This is to certify that Miss So and so had been employed by XXXXXXXXXcompany Ltd as a clerk from 2013 to 2014. Then, she was under three years on probation with the basis monthly salary of HK$00000.00
Within that probation period, she could neither be able to fulfill her duties as a clerk nor to accept our repeated advices and guidances. In view of that, we persuade her to try but failed to do so prior to the resignation.by herselfl.

__________Sd
(Name)
Secretary,
Address:
Phone:
Date:
參考: Partly according to ”The Advanced Learner's Dictionary of Current English with Chinese Translation” published by Oxford University Press in 1975


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