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AIA Group Limited, an International Assurance Company founded in 1931 and based in Hong Kong. There are many branches in Asia- Pacific region, for instance, Taiwan, China, Japan and South Korea. There are more than 21000 employees throughout the world.
AIA offers a comprehensive range of insurance plans to the public, for example, Group Automobile Life Insurance and critical illness insurance plan. According to the findings from the Office of the Commissioner of Insurance in 2013, AIA is one of the best Insurance Companies in Hong Kong .

Recently, AIA offers a new product to pet lovers – Pet Care Insurance. Nowadays, the medical fees for the pet owners have been increased dramatically . Many pet owners have a heavy burden on it. Pet Care Insurance is included the coverage of medical fees, Third-Party Liability and Holiday Cancellation etc

2014-03-08 22:54:14 補充：
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2014-03-09 11:26:50 補充：
According to the findings from the Office of the Commissioner of Insurance in 2013,
AIA WAS ranked the best insurance company in Hong Kong.

this year 2014

Introduction of AIA Group Ltd:
AIA Group Limited, an International Assurance Company was founded in 1931 and based in Hong Kong. There are offices in Asia- Pacific region, for instance, Taiwan, China, Japan and South Korea. It has around 21,000 employees in the world.
It offers a comprehensive range of insurance plans to the public, for example, Group Automobile, Life and critical illness insurances. According to the findings of the Commissioner of Insurance in 2013, it was the best of Hong Kong Insurance Company in general.
Recently, it offers a new plan for the pet lovers – Pet Care Insurance. Nowadays, the costs of veterinary care are dramatically increased. Many pet owners have a heavy burden of insurance on their pets. Pet Care Insurance including coverage for veterinary care, Third-Party Liability and Holiday Cancellation etc.

Just a suggestion:

According to the findings from the Office of the Commissioner of Insurance in 2013, AIA is ranked the best insurance company in Hong Kong.

Nowadays the veterinary costs increase dramatically. Many pet owners have to shoulder the heavy burden on it.

- no comma after Nowadays.

2014-03-11 02:24:52 補充：
According to the findings .... in 2013,
~ AIA was ranked the best insurance company in H.K.
~ AIA was one of the best Insurance Companies in H.K.

自己弄錯, 思想上 AIA 直到現今仍是 the best insurance company in H.K., 所以用了 present tense.相信 2014年 ranking 未出.
問題是昨年做 ranking, 文法上應用 past tense.
謝謝過客改正

AIA Group Limited, an International Assurance Company, was founded in 1931 with Hong Kong as its base of service. There are many branches in Hong Kong in the Asia-Pacific region, such as Taiwan, China, Japan and South Korea. It has around 21000 employees in the world.
AIA offers a comprehensive range of insurance plans to the public, including Group Automobile Life Insurance and critical illness insurance plan. According the the findings from the Office of the Commissioner of Insurance in 2013, AIA is ranked the best of Kong Kong Insurance Company.
Recently, AIA has offered a new product to pet lovers - Pet Care Insurance. Nowadays, the veterinary costs are dramatically increasing. Many pet owner are having a heavy burden on it. Pet Care Insurance covers veterinary costs, Third-Party Liability and Holiday Cancellations etc.

過客 大師，很久不見了～

祝安好～

無啦?
個Scenario寫得好好呀, 不過ending 好似未完咁, 最後加多句啦!
At coming 15 mins, we have a presentation about this plan to our managers.
Hope that they (you) can approve the budget for our new plan.