我有一份功課係關於MTR,
請幫我睇下篇文夠唔夠coherent, grammar, 同埋夠唔夠crtitical thinking.
因為我怕比人check到我cheating, 我唔敢係到post
我send左 google link比各位, 希望你地幫一幫我, many thanks!!
改grammar, 關於MTR
2014-03-07 7:33 am
回答 (4)
2014-03-12 7:22 am
✔ 最佳答案
1. Economic" Five new rail project construction... " to "Five new rail project constructions..."
2. Economic
"MTR able to make ..." to "MTR has the ability to make…"
3. Economic
"trains equipped with LCD… has been introduced." to "… have been introduced."
http://cytc-jeffrey.blogspot.hk
2014-03-11 6:15 pm
Regarding your "MTR" article, I've already sent the adjusted article to you through yahoo.com several days ago and hoped you got it. Your email address is
[email protected]
Yip
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Yip
參考: Yip
2014-03-08 9:30 pm
i can't see the google link. I may can help u :)
2014-03-07 5:24 pm
其實叫人proof-read和修改唔係cheating.否則世上沒有人會有進步。
你怕別人抄你的作文(或抄人的作文)才是知識產權的保護。
不過睇唔到你google link了甚麼。
有時間就給你批閱意見。
你怕別人抄你的作文(或抄人的作文)才是知識產權的保護。
不過睇唔到你google link了甚麼。
有時間就給你批閱意見。
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原文連結 [永久失效]:
https://hk.answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20140306000051KK00205