求英詩!Making Music

2014-02-17 7:53 am
跪求"Making Music" (by Andrew Collett)
20point!
NO BULLSHIT NO ADVERTISEMENT

回答 (2)

2014-02-18 3:18 am
✔ 最佳答案
I’m a BIG BASS drum
booming down the street,
tapping with my fingers
to the booming bass beat.
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I’m a fiddle playing music
shooting notes up high,
watching as they fall
from a music-making sky.
圖片參考:http://www.jcckc.net/english/poem/sound
I’m an old double bass
grumbling in my boots,
shaking every tree top
down to its roots.
圖片參考:http://www.jcckc.net/english/poem/sound
I’m a small brass horn
singing to the stars,
swimming in their moonshine
and diving down to Mars.
圖片參考:http://www.jcckc.net/english/poem/sound
I’m a cymbal sitting still
making not a sound,
waiting for the moment
when I CRASH to the ground.
圖片參考:http://www.jcckc.net/english/poem/sound
2014-02-17 9:55 am
No bullshit No advertisement:-On "Making Music" by Andrew Collett.
I'm a Big Bass drum
booming down the street,
tapping with my fingers
to the booming bass beat.

I'm a fiddle playing music
shooting notes up high,
watching as they fall
from a music-making sky.

I'm an old double bass
grumbling in my boots,
shaking every tree top
down to its roots.

I'm a small brass horn
singing to the stars,
swimming in their moonshine
and diving down to Mars.

I'm a cymbal sitting still
making not a sound,
waiting for the moment
When I CRASH to the ground.

Analysing the poetic language:-
(1)booming down means various sounds,banging,blasting,crashing, roaring;"fingers to the" are being linking together in speech;booming bass note low beat;An emotive &re-emotive poetical;Listen to the music of mind here; when Listen;yet up beat tempo when written &read;A certain rhythm&tune are poetical not lyrical; To read a bit slowly to focus on pronunciation;bass=best; b^b^b^.
(2)To try fiddling with music when violin is not a fiddle;up high=a pie; shooting up&down, music-making is the title.
(3)bass=bottom low note;grumblin=lin; the beat are static flowery that so deep=sore deep=down root from top;
(4)horn singing and swimming diving are imaginative;
(5)cymbal=symbol ; sitting,waiting has a small sound when surprisingly a loud crash falling plunge topple=to the ground.They are metrical&poetical.
Hope it will help successfully.

2014-02-17 17:08:23 補充:
bull****=an offensive term for writing dismissed as foolish,inaccurate.The slang has been passed by Supervisor website.Thanks.


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