關於英文作文的問題

My name is George Wong. I am thirty one years old. I have brother, mother and
father. I have been dating Mary for one year. I always go to Causeway Bay with
her. I am interested in playing football, basketball and badminton. I graduated
from the Hong Kong Institute of Lee Wai Lee in 2007. I studied many subjects.
I am proficient in Microsoft Word, Powerpoint and Excel.

我宜家做緊一份功課，需要做一篇英文介紹自己，想問下篇野既tense有無錯。