School Outing Dat writing

2014-01-29 6:52 am
School Outing Day (Eng)
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2014-02-13 5:56 am
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全文幫你作是不可能的,但我覺得可以教你組織一下整文的大綱。

題目是 School Outing Day,應該是介紹學校的其中一次外出活動,例如是參觀或者旅行。

我以參觀作為一個例子。
例如參觀博物館。

你可以於首段作一個整體的概括。
說明去哪裏參觀,什麼時候去,有什麼大致感受。
然後每段說明詳情。

I take visiting museum as an example.

Paragraph 1
On which day (or just before the holiday), what museum did you visit?
With who? the whole class? the whole school?

Paragraph 2
Any background information about the museum?
Science museum? Music museum? History museum?
What impression do you have before the visit?

Paragraph 3
The details of your trip.
The mood.
The participants.
The details, e.g. transportation, weather, etc.

Paragraph 4
What happened in the visit?
Any tour guide?
Any special event happened?
What is your feeling? Happy? Boring?

Paragraph 5
What is the overall impression and feeling?
Is it a good outing day?
Is it worthwhile to go again?
Do you think the school should have more outing days?


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