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1. He reminded the students that they might fail “Sport” (a subject) if they did not put on sportswear when playing in the garden.

Note:
a. "remind" is a transitive verb. It needs an object.
b. Student should be in plural form because “students” and “they” should agree in number.
c. In past tense, use “might” in stead of “may”.
d. You fail chemistry (not fail in chemistry) ~ fail an academic subject
e. “put on” = wear. “Wear sportswear” sounds awkward.
f. in the garden ~ wrong use of preposition

2. Two new projects will start after Chinese New Year. The Property Management should cooperate with the contractor to inform the residents.

Note:
a. Article "the" is missing.
b. No need to put the verb “start” in passive voice.
c. Chinese New Year should be in capital letter.

3. Mary was requested to find another method to solve that problem. Jason suggested another method and would test it. Mary asked Jason to do a test run in advance.

Note:
a. Delete “an” because “another” is also a determiner.
b. Try to avoid using “this” when using past tense.
c. "suggest" and "propose" mean the same. You don’t suggest a proposal.
d. “test run” is a noun ~ a process designed to test whether a machine, procedure or system works well


題外:
Is there a subject called “sport” or "sports" in school now?
In my schooldays, it is commonly known as “Physical Education”.



2014-01-18 21:39:23 補充：
Correction:
In my schooldays, it was commonly known as “Physical Education”.

Now they should also be called P.E. lessons.

Same.

(1)He reminded that students may fail in sport subject if they did not wear sportswear when playing on the garden during the lesson.

(2)Two new projects will be started after Chinese New Year. The property managment should cooperate with Contractor to inform the residents (accordingly).

(3)Mary was requested to find another method to solve this problem. Jason suggested another proposal and would test it somehow. Mary asked Jason to test the method (proposal) in advance (before the event).