英文作文底子好好架朋友麻煩幫幫手

--Students nowadays are spending too much time online and playing video game.This is affecting their ability to communicate with others.
---I agree.When they are long-enjoying drop-head victim of the game, they claim that their opinions, feelings, information are understood by the i-Padx4. Later when call for job-interview they can't restore back to normal because they are shy group who can't communicate.It is said that during dinner at home,they are directing the call between parents-sons+daughter in making conversations only, in sending informations between as the only communication way by means of the phone to complete the meal.
----In the job interview they can use sign language to communicate to express something as they can't write an English Letter !They thought they have a mystical and violent communication between Employers and God.They can't talk seriously and deeply with the Employers.If they can't communicate, they can't find a job after F6,yet deaf people use the sign language to communicate can save their life and time on the wasting on video games.

我好想幫你，但功課應該自己做，否則考試你就唔識架啦！點都好，以下有D建議：

-學生們應多花時間溫習和做功課，唔應花太多時間上網和玩視頻遊戲。(就算有多餘的時間，也應做一些戶外活動，對身體也好些。)

-沈迷上網有好多壞處：對眼睛不好、影響社交能力(因只顧着電腦而不與人溝通)、對身心都不好(身體：因整天都對着電腦、心理：可能因了些不良資料而情緒不安)等。


希望幫到你！加油哦！！