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----The home improvement (which) I would like to make most is my bedroom.Firstly, I would like to lay down a( large) pink carpet on the floor for my bedroom, because pink is my favourite colour. I also feel free rolling over the ground of my bedroom, and no longer fear of (the) cold in winter when I step or (rest) on it.
-----Secondly, I want to buy a bigger and taller bookcase to replace the old one(which)size is insufficient for (inclusion) of my increasing number of books.
-----Next, one of the things need to be fixed urgently (is) my bedroom door. Because there is a big hole (in its )middle.
-----Many people who has visited my home will ask the same question: "What's matter with the door and why it looks like that ?"
-----Actually the door was broken once (adverb) when I( had) a quarrel with my sister. But I never tell anyone about the truth (noun).
----I chose to lie to them and explained that the door was broken in an accident in order to conceal this scandal(ous) (adv.) affair.
-----I would invite my sister to do the innovation work owing to the fact that it is our bedroom.
----Additionally, she is very creative that she can help make some particular (adj) ideas for improving bedroom living effectively and competently.

The home improvement I wouldlike to make the most is my bedroom. Firstly, I would like to put a giant pinkcarpet on my bedroom floor because pink is my favourite colour. I can roll overon the carpet floor as freely as I want to and will no longer afraid of feelingcold in the winter when I step on it. Secondly,I want to buy a bigger and higher bookshelf to put all of my books in it. Thirdly, I want to fix my bedroom door sincethere is a big hole in the middle of it. Many people asked me the reason why my door was broken. The real reason was I had a quarrel with mysister and somehow broke it during the fight. Yet I have never told anybody the truth about it, I chose to lie to themin order to conceal this real scandal.I will invite my sister to helpme with this renovation since we own this room together. In addition, she has a very creative mind inregards to interior design. She cancontribute her creativity for improving our bedroom to make it look much more decentand beautiful.

家装,我愿最是我的卧室。首先,我想躺下一个巨大的粉红色的地毯在地板上我的卧室,因为粉色是我最喜欢的颜色。我也能感觉到自由滚动在我的卧室的地面,不再害怕寒冷的冬天当我一步或网站。其次,我想买一个更大的和更高的书柜来取代旧的尺寸是不够的包括我越来越多的书籍。接下来,一个紧急的事情需要固定,这是我的卧室的门。的原因是因为有一个大洞的中间。很多人访问我的家会问我同样的问题,是有什么事门,为什么是这样子?实际上一旦时间的门坏了,我和我的妹妹吵了一架。但我从来没有告诉任何人,真的,但是我选择了谎言和解释了门坏了

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