Nick is writing an email to his friend James. Read the email. There is one mistake in each numbered line. Correct the mistakes. Underline a word that is incorrect and write the correct word above it. Mark the position of a missing word whit a "v" and write the missing word above it.If a word is not necessary, cross it out.
1 of the time playing a football.Afterwards, I drank at least four
2 Coke to cool me down.
3 Ben lit the barbecue. At first, he used papers instead of
4 charcoals. Silly boy! However, his cooking was good. I ate so much!
5 In fact, I ate four steak! My sister Mia doesn't like steak so l had her share too
6 Oh, l nearly forgot! Some of Mia's hairs caught fire when she leant
7 over the barbecue.Ben poured waters over her and put the fire
8 out quickly. lt was really scary experience! l'll weite again when
9 I have a time nect week.
Grammar
2013-12-31 3:26 am
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2013-12-31 12:27 pm
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1 We spent time playing a football. Afterwards, I drank at least four2 Cokes to cool me down.
3 Ben lit the barbecue. At first, he used paper instead of
4 charcoal. Silly boy! However, his cooking was good. I ate so much!
5 In fact, I ate four steaks! My sister Mia doesn't like steak so l had her share too.
6 Oh, l nearly forgot! Some of Mia's hair caught fire when she leant
7 over the barbecue. Ben poured water over her and put the fire
8 out quickly. It was a ("v") really scary experience! I'll write again when
9 I have (a "X") time next week. = I have time next week.
Comment
1. A main verb is missing in the first sentence. "of a" is replaced with "We spent"
2. Coke should be plural. (~ not one Coke, but four Cokes)
3. "paper" (紙) is an uncountable noun ~ no plural.
4. "charcoal" (木炭) is an uncountable noun ~ no plural
5. "steak" should be plural. (~ not one steak, but four steaks)
6. "hair" (頭髮) is an uncountable noun ~ no plural. When hair is a countable noun, it means 毛. For example, two hairs 兩條頭髮,兩條毛
7. "water" (水) is an uncountable noun ~ no plural
8. Determiner "a" is missing. ~ a really scary experience
9. delete "a" since time (時間) is an uncountable noun. You don't put a definite article in front of an uncountable noun.
"time" can be countable if it means 次數
Typo errors:
8. weite (write)
9. nect (next)
Notation used:
"v" = insert
"X" = cross out; delete
2013-12-31 04:35:23 補充：
CORRECTION:
1 ... of the time playing (a "X") football. Afterwards, I drank at least four
Comment
football 足球 is an uncountable noun.You don't put a definite article in front of an uncountable noun.
The first sentence is incomplete. Assume there is another line above.
2013-12-31 5:42 am
One mistake in each numbered line has been corrected with corrected words,missing words, and unnecessary words have been left out.Judge and decide yourself.
(1)To the time of playing football. Afterwards, I drank at least 4
(2)Cokes to cool me down.
(3)Ben lit the barbecue fire. At first, he used paper instead of
(4)charcoals. Silly boy ! However, his cooking was good. I ate much !
(5)In fact, I ate 4 steaks ! My sister didn't like steak so I had her share too.
(6)Oh, I nearly forgot !Some of Mia's hairs caught fire when she leaned
(7)over the barbecue. Ben poured water over her and put the fire
(8)out quickly. It was really scary experience ! I'll write again when
(9)I have time next week.
(1)To the time of playing football. Afterwards, I drank at least 4
(2)Cokes to cool me down.
(3)Ben lit the barbecue fire. At first, he used paper instead of
(4)charcoals. Silly boy ! However, his cooking was good. I ate much !
(5)In fact, I ate 4 steaks ! My sister didn't like steak so I had her share too.
(6)Oh, I nearly forgot !Some of Mia's hairs caught fire when she leaned
(7)over the barbecue. Ben poured water over her and put the fire
(8)out quickly. It was really scary experience ! I'll write again when
(9)I have time next week.
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