幫幫手檢查句子

(A)檢查句子及(B)改正1.過期日冇標示係包装上.
(A)the date of expiry was not be marked on the casing. - was已包括be的意思，be是多餘的(B)The date of expiry was not marked on the casing.
2.(A)有關12月3日由陳小姐於發出的投訴_的改善措施, 管理處報告已開會討論(B)有關由於陳小姐12月3日發出的投訴信的改善措施, 管理處報告已和分包商開會討論(A)The improvement measures about the complaint letter received from Ms. Chan on 3-Dec. Property management reported that a meeting was held by sub-contractors to discuss the problem.(B)In regard to the improvement measures suggested in the complaint letter received from Ms. Chan on Dec 3, Property Management Office reported that a meeting had been held with sub-contractors to discuss the issues.

2013-12-29 04:50:59 補充：
2 (B)可以簡潔些；
In response to Ms Chan's complaint letter of Dec 3, Property Management Office reported that a meeting had been held with sub-contractors to discuss about improvement measures.

1.過期日冇標示係包装上.
The date of expiry wasn't marked on the casing.
2.有關12月3日由陳小姐於發出的投訴的改善措施, 管理處報告已開會討論
In regards to the complaint of requests for improving measures which was raised by Ms. Chan on 3-Dec. Property management responded that a meeting had been held with the sub-contractors to discuss that matter over.

1.
was not be marked 不正確, was not marked 已經可以
似乎情況 is not marked 都可以
casing 可以用 package, 不過也是似乎情況

2013-12-29 01:07:10 補充：
2.
你的句子斷開了兩句, 以致文法有誤。

Regarding the complaint by Ms Chan on Dec 3 about the improvement measures, the property management reported that the problem has been discussed in a meeting held by sub-contractors.