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fast food restaurant become more and more popular nowaday, i think one of it's remarkable advantage attracting people is the convenience. After made the order , we can get our food within several minutes owing to most of them have been cooked already. The steward just easily heat them up , and transmit to consumer. And the throughout procedure is simple and time-saved.
so I think it is very suitable for us as we being in the hustle and bustle city. Moreover, fast food generally cost cheap and affordable. When I was still in school, I always preferred to go to the Mcdonald at lunch time. It is because it can help me to save several coins a day , so that enable me to buy more favourite stuffs .
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As we know ,many sports can help us stay fit, but i think the most effective one among them is running at least half an hour a day. for me, this not only good for health ,but also burn off my stress . it is because i usually put the headphone into my ears to enjoy the music during running, meanwhile i can get a moment to relax and throw away the trouble trivia temporarily. Sometime my friends will join me, we then disscuss about what anything else can do to enhance the keep-fit more effectively like the nutrition. I also made a maneu for my three meals to restrict the amount and type of food I take every day. Therefore i will ensured myself would not take exceed calories each day. Undoubtedly , do the appropriate exercise and maintain the balance diet are the most effective ways to keep us into a shape.