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Last night, I found out that my table tennis racket had gone, this is the present that my mother bought for me! I haven't used it yet, suddenly I thought that it maybe in my father's bicycle's basket.
Sure enough, it is really in my father's bicycle's basket. (The original was yesterday)???<I don't understand>I put my racket on my father's bicycle's basket and forgot to put away and I think that I was lucky because(or 'since',write 'since' will make you get higher marks!^_^)I can get back my table tennis racket.
I won't be forgetful nextime!


Your passage is quite good but there are quite lots of language careless mistakes! I hope you can improve by my opinions. Good luck! Go straight on! Don't give up!

2013-12-20 20:29:16 補充：
Quite good...^_^

Last night, I found my tabletennis' racket which was given by my mother, missing and I had never used it before. As being remembered, it might be dropped into somewhere.else.
After having searched, it was found in my father's bicycle basket then it was yesterday, I put my racket on his father's bicycle basket and forgot to put away and I thought I was lucky enough because I can get back my tabletennis' racket;then I will never be worrying again.

Last night, I found out that the table tennis racket my mother bought me was gone! I had never use that racket and I figure out that it might be in the basket of my father's bicycle . It was in the basket because I forgot to take it out yesterday. I feel so glad that the racket is not completely lost.

With all due respect, I proofread ...

Last night, I found out that my table tennis racket was gone. That was the present my mother bought for me! I hadn't used it since then. Suddenly I thought it might be left in the basket on my father's bicycle. Surely it was found. ...

2013-12-20 02:28:46 補充：
Yesterday I left it there and forgot to put it away. It is lucky that I can get my table tennis racket back I won't forget next time!