幫我看一遍這段英文就好 看文法對不對就好拜託

2013-12-19 5:49 am
拜託幫我看文法對或錯
自己寫的英文作文
題目叫做【What Makes Me Special】



I really had a special problem ,

In the past , I dress up best my appearance stand out from others in a positive way .I believe handsome makes people respect you more. There's only one of me in this world. I always do my best to keep a good appearance , And my handsome lets me see the reality of people. By appearance I have always been able to win many praise easily.

Until today , Handsome became my obsession . So I put a question to the 「Yahoo Knowledge Home」
" there are many girls love me and makes me many problems , because I am really handsome over ,
How can I refuse her and handle this ? " And only one person answer my question , said " you have the same problem with me "


Of course , this is a big joke .



文法對嗎? 有笑點嗎? 有離題嗎?
拜託了 拜託 謝謝
更新1:

幫我修正一下拜託謝謝 那只是個笑話抱歉拜託謝謝 改成對的文法謝謝真的

回答 (2)

2013-12-19 9:09 pm
✔ 最佳答案
文法對嗎?(x) 有笑點嗎?(x) 有離題嗎?(o)


I am special because I am really handsome.

I like to dress fashionably to stand out in a crowd, which makes me full of confidence to do anything.

I believe that good looks makes you attractive and more people want to make friends with you.

Everyone is unique in this world and me too. I always do my best to keep my good looks. It lets me see that people always prefer beautiful things.

Good-looking appearance always makes me win many praise easily until now handsomeness becomes my obsession so I post my question on yahoo : "Many girls love me because I am handsome. It makes me troubled. How can I refuse them and handle this? "Then only one person answers my question and says" You have the same problem as me. "

See, that's my special-- handsomeness.

2013-12-19 11:37 am
這題是要訂正還是只要說對或錯就好?
後者的答案是錯很多地方.


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