唔該大家幫手睇下篇文章既時態有無錯

2013-12-15 12:07 am
I went to ABC Company to watch a film last Wednesday. I took a taxi to the
company. It was composed of two tall buildings. There were a round table at
the centre of the company. Three books were on the table. The three books were
thick. I went to Room 206 to watch the film. When an accident happened outside
the company, I was watching the film.

大家可唔可以幫手睇下以上篇文章既時態有無錯。
更新1:

唔記得講ABC Company 係宜家都係由兩座高樓所組成,咁用past tense 有無問題。

更新2:

上邊寫錯左野,應該係"There was a round table at the centre of the company. "

回答 (3)

2013-12-15 2:10 am
✔ 最佳答案
你形容一啲事實, 應用現在式
I went to ABC Company to watch a film last Wednesday. I took a taxi to the company.
It is composed of two tall buildings.
你是想告訴人, 這公司是由兩座高的建築物組成, 還是告訴人你到的地点是由兩座建築物組成, 你這句的 "It"應是說 ABC Company.

There was a round table at the centre of the company. Three thick books had put on the table. I went to Room 206 to watch the film. When an accident happened outside the company, I was watching the film.
2013-12-24 7:29 pm
It was last Wednesday when I went to ABC Company to watch the film. I took a taxi to the destination. That company was situated somewhere inside these two tall buildings. When I entered, I found there was a round table at the entrance of that company and also three thick books were put on it. Then I went to Room 206 to watch the film as previously invited. As I was watching the film, an accident happened outside the company,..............
參考: Partly according to ”The Advanced Learner's Dictionary of Current English with Chinese Translation” published by Hongkong Oxford University Press in 1975
2013-12-15 10:07 am
Some of the sentences can becombined to make it more laconic, so I took the liberty of summarizing yourparagraph to a certain extent. I took a taxi to ABC Company to watch a film last Wednesday. It is (this should be present tense) composed of two tall buildings. There was (using “was” instead of “were” since thefollowing noun is not a plural) a round table at the centre of the company, and therewere three thick books placed on it.I went to Room 206 to watch the film. Anaccident happened outside the company while I was watching the film.


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