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在小組報告裡,我學到如何設計一份計劃書,雖然當中遇到了不少困難,但這些都是值得的[1]。而在討論過程中,我們每一個成員都是到齊的,所以大家對整個過程都一清二楚。但我認為最困難的是在尋找足夠資料去support我們所選擇的題目,我[倒]足足花了兩個星期才能夠找到足夠的資料去support我們的題目[2]。不過比起這些困難,我在這次小組報告裡,取得了很多寶貴的經驗,假若下次再設計一份計劃書,我一定會比今次更加好。 In this group report, I have learnt how to design a proposal. Even though it was difficult, it was worth the efforts. Every team member attend to the discussion, so we all understood the process. The most difficult part, I think, was to search and collect sufficient information in supporting our chosen topic; I used two weeks to gather enough supporting materials to complete this project. I have gained valuable experience despite the difficulties; which I will be able to design for another proposal better next time. [坦白講,中文的錯子[1]和文句重覆意思[2]等似乎小問題反映閣下的思考有點粗心大意,還可以多點學習如何精要表達。英文「譯文」中[2]的兩句組你的內容表達的雖然差不多一樣,但我嘗試用了不同的詞語表達你想講出來的不用層次或角度,可留意學習:「足夠」 – sufficient / enough;「資料」-information / materials;「尋找/找」- search / gather。這些少少變化便會令句子不像是說重覆的東西,你亦可以研究修改你的思考和中文句的用詞,而句子中的層次(分別)只是「困難」跟「兩星期」,但「找資料」這詞組便是很重覆。]