求英文勁既人幫手改文

首先告訴你的標點符號寫法全錯-電腦都mark了條綠線警告你有錯，標點前是跟前一句尾不會有空隔的，標點後如果是不是句號是隔一個空位，句號(full-stop)後是跟下一句之間應該是隔兩個空位的(但似乎近期隔一空位已可以)。 1. The Front Desk (Reception) Department …. It is located in the busiest area of a hotel's lobby.
First, .. guests get their ….
Second, …. [And then] The reception desk [may] comprises of cashier, registration and room assignment.
Finally, in briefing …, is able to earn a higher hotel revenue. [it should be actively promoted ???這句的it不知所指是何事] and The reception desk handles files guests properly, [the convenience用錯字吧 – 方便???甚麼] settles of unpaid debts, develops residents record, operating conditions and forecasts, forwards the guests’ letters, handles inquiries and filing of the Department, [which is the data to focus on除了文法不對外，唔明這句的data是指甚麼-全部上面的東西???最好另寫一句結束-你這句已經太多,…,…,…,…,分不清在列甚麼了].

2. okFirst, a close … up-dated.
Second, ….
And then, there are Porters to help open the door to receive or store luggage wrapped into the room.
Finally[這句的關係不是finally，但不知你想如何編排], communicate with each other, the time schedule for the maintenance of the rooms, and the room occupancy rate can be improved. 3. First, the Food and Beverage Department offers … food and drinks.
Second, these services may be provided by coffee shops, bars, …Also, the hotel's business forecast information [provided to] facilitates manpower scheduling.
Finally, ordering information provided corporate, with meal time and place arrangements.[最後這段完全不明白你想表達甚麼sorry，corporate意思是指hotel的集團還是你想說可以提供地方給商業活動飲食的訂位???Finally businesses may order venue and meals to be held in the hotel.] 由於編排內容本身有點亂，沒有給你重寫了。另外用first, second,…finally亦生硬和錯用-不是講任何三樣東西便把他們隨意寫成first, second, finally便是合理的。太長了不能盡改。 你想寫這專題就應該去酒店查究參考他們真實的部門名稱和用詞。我未聽過front office這部門名稱，所以先行改動-如果我有錯你自己還原吧。~

1.The Front Desk Department is the most visible department ina hotel . It is located in the busiest area of a hotel's lobby. Firstly, it is the place that the customers have theirinitial impression of the hotel.Secondly , it is also the communication center of the entireoperations of the hotel. They are alsoresponsible for the tasks of cashier registration and room assignment.Finally, they have to answer customer inquiries regardingthe facilities and services outside the hotel, such as shopping malls,restaurants, telecommunications needs and the like. The reception desk have to be highlyefficient to handle guests queries, accounting issues, operational strategies,and to reply promptly of the guests’ inquiries. 2.Housekeeping Department is responsible for the managementof guest-rooms and the cleanliness of all public areas of a hotel . Firstly , a close liaison between housekeeping and frontoffice is essential, so that theinformation about guest-rooms will be kept in an accurate manner. Secondly , the housekeeping and front office usually have adepartment head ( Executive Housekeeper and Front Office Manager ) who reportsto the Director of Rooms . Hence, the Porter has to open the door for receiving theluggage and ensure they are being delivered to the room.Finally , with the cooperation between various departments, theroom occupancy rate will be improved.2013-12-01 16:37:45 補充The Food and Beverage Department focus mainly on theprovision of food and drinks . Secondly , the aforementioned services may be provided bycoffee shops , bars , lounges, restaurants , and also by the banqueting androom-service departments.Moreover, the hotel'sbusiness forecast information can help facilitating the labor power schedule.