A recent survey research for Friends of the Earth showed that a high proportion of Hong Kong people have mobile phones and they frequently replace their mobile phones. The average period of a Hongkonger replacing a mobile phone is about one year and eight months, about ten percent Hongkongers who quickly change their mobile phones once a month.
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2013-11-17 11:01 pm
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2013-11-18 6:16 am
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A recent survey research for [the] Friends of the Earth showed that a high proportion of Hong Kong people [had] mobile phones and [x they] frequently [replaced them]. The average period [between two consecutive replacements of mobile phones] [of a Hongkonger] [was] about one year and eight months, [and] about ten percent [of] [Hong Kong people] [x who] quickly [replaced] their mobile phones once a month. 
2013-11-17 11:53 pm
you can change replace to change....this is more fluent
not much grammatical mistakes
the recent research ,use showed,so u are correct.
not much grammatical mistakes
the recent research ,use showed,so u are correct.
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