Dear Mary,
I am sorry to tell you that my watch has been lost. I believe that I cannot give the watch to you on the coming Saturday.
Yours,
Steven
我尋日收到Mary 封信，話想要我今年四月買個隻錶用黎今個星期六展覽，於是我今天寫信回覆佢，想問問上邊封信既tense 有無用錯。
有關英文書信的問題
2013-11-14 3:33 pm
回答 (4)
2013-11-15 5:32 am
你 tense 其實沒有什麼問題，用 present perfect tense 沒問題，但用 past tense 也可以，兩者的分別在於 present perfect tense 看起來會有強調作用，past tense 沒有，比較：
Two people have been killed.
Two people were killed.
不過在你這裡，我偏向用 past tense，感覺上較自然。
用 present tense 沒錯，因為你現在在回覆她。
至於你這封信，如果是 formal letter，語氣是合適的，但若是 informal，就好像太過正式了。
2013-11-14 7:34 pm
Error and corrections:-
Dear Mary,
I am sorry to tell you that my watch which I bought in April last had been lost. I believe I can't give the watch to you for Watch Exhibition on the coming Saturday.
Yours,
Steven
Dear Mary,
I am sorry to tell you that my watch which I bought in April last had been lost. I believe I can't give the watch to you for Watch Exhibition on the coming Saturday.
Yours,
Steven
2013-11-14 7:31 pm
Dear Mary,
I am sorry to tell you that I have lost my watch, so that I cannot borrow it to you
on the coming Saturday.
Yours,
Steven
文法上大概係咁,但內容上其實可以提供埋解決方法俾MARY, 例如 I know XX has
the same watch as me, I can ask for you.
I am sorry to tell you that I have lost my watch, so that I cannot borrow it to you
on the coming Saturday.
Yours,
Steven
文法上大概係咁,但內容上其實可以提供埋解決方法俾MARY, 例如 I know XX has
the same watch as me, I can ask for you.
2013-11-14 5:47 pm
我覺得你寫得有啲怪
用詞5係太啱
如果我係你
我會咁寫:
Dear Mary,
I am sorry to tell you that I have lost my watch. I don't think I'll be able to give it to you (on) the coming Saturday.
Yours,
Steven
用詞5係太啱
如果我係你
我會咁寫:
Dear Mary,
I am sorry to tell you that I have lost my watch. I don't think I'll be able to give it to you (on) the coming Saturday.
Yours,
Steven
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