★help persuasive speech!

Topic: control excessive stree and tension to to stay positive
and make learning more interesting and satisfying in school

please help me to write 3 main points,each points should have an example

main points 要求的格式:problem-solution-benefit
See the statement above; No the form but was like this.

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The topic ; A woman being horrified by the condition.

main point 1: documents existence of problem
The lucky family met up a wild dog ,
. the whole families were terrified so much.
Finally, that of which all were safe.

main point2: present solution to problem
Describing the detail as follows;

Such a family who is happy lives in a small town.
Their house is near a hill , no the neighbors but alone.
One day, a child had several encounter with a dog
. who was wild and wilder.
This dog was at their home with the child
. that her was playing in the backyard.
Her mother heard her daughter scream,
. and looked up that its dog seemed to pounce on her .
It's approching closer.
How terrible they were !

main3: presents benefits derived from the solution
The solution looks like those ;

Then her mother grabbed a shovel in the yard
. and swung it at this wild dog .
Finally, its dog ran off and her mother held daughter .
They though that they were thankful
. and obtained their own safety.

[ they were thankful ....很欣慰她們平安無事 ]

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