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my invention.... == im guessing it's about an invention u invented?


my invention

if i had an invention, i would invent an an automatic ice-cream venting machine!
this machine works just like a normal venting machine, only better.
first, you put in the money and select your choice of ice cream flavor. after that, a cone or ice-cream cup will pop out. Then, you put the cone/cup in front of the opening of the machine and press "ok".
soon, it will squirt out a certain amount of ice-cream, and after that just take out the cone/ cup. if you selected a cup, it will automatically push out a spoon from another opening for you.
last but not least, you enjoy the delicious ice-cream!

- it should be: an automatic ice-cream vending machine (spelling mistake)